A Vow Through Life's Winding Paths



“A Vow Through Life's Winding Paths”

It started with a friendship so simple, so true,
No words were needed, just me and you.
Feelings hidden, carried upon shoulders so strong,
Because there was someone meant all along.

In glances exchanged and talks few and rare,
With friends all around, a bond we did share.
Unnoticed it was, until one day it's clear,
I've fallen for you, my heart holds you dear.

Hoping and praying for feelings to be right,
If wrong, let them fade with time's gentle flight.

But days, months, and years swiftly passed by,
Fate's hand it seemed, not just a random try.
Emotions once concealed, now find their release,
They'll grow and flourish, bring inner peace.

In a moment, I confessed with courage anew,
My heart's raging fire, blazing for you.
In times of your sorrow, when teardrops start to flow,
There's someone who cares, a love that does show.

A heart learning to forget, trying to erase,
Still feels the pain's extra trace.
For it truly hurts to see,
The one you love crying in misery.

But then I saw a new beginning in view,
God's plan unfolding for me and for you.
A heart, once so heavy with grief and with pain,
Slowly gained colors, like a rainbow's sweet gain.

I started to question the Lord up above,
Why did He allow this journey to prove,
That a heart almost shattered and ready to break,
Still held hope and love for a future to make.

I began to walk a path led by His grace,
Seeking answers, finding strength in His embrace.
Day and night, my prayers were laid bare,
The Lord who answers, heard my every care.

And gradually, everything began to shift,
As I heard your sweet "Yes" in the midst of the rift.
Never did I imagine it could be so,
That dreams once distant would finally glow.

As love deepened slowly, like an endless well,
A reservoir of emotions, difficult to quell.
Though distance stood tall in our story's grand plan,
Love was the bridge that helped us span.

Even when storms brought misunderstandings to play,
I knew God would guide us through, come what may.
For He's the architect of this love so true,
In our love story's pages, He penned me and you.

My love, in this new chapter that we face,
I may not be perfect, my flaws leave a trace.
But one thing I promise, with all that I am,
I'll love you till the end, with an unbreakable dam.

A family we'll build, hand in hand we will stand,
With unconditional love, we'll fill every strand.
Through trials and challenges that life may unfold,
Facing them together, with a love strong and bold.

My love, I love you, these words I declare,
Here on this altar, my feelings I share.
Witnessed by those close to your heart,
You're the only one in mine, right from the start.

Bound by love's thread, we're united and free,
Every day of our lives, together we'll be.
Though wrinkles may come, eyes lose their gleam,
I'll love you forever, just as in this dream.

A family we'll be, united and whole,
With a love that's endless, filling every role.
Through storms and through sunshine, side by side,
Our love story's journey, our hearts as our guide.

My love, I love you, my words remain true,
In this journey of love, it's just me and you.
Through life's winding paths, come what may,
With your hand in mine, forever we'll stay

About this poem

"A Vow Through Life's Winding Paths" is a heartfelt exploration of the journey from friendship to enduring love, navigating the complexities of emotions, challenges, and the profound strength found in commitment. The verses express the highs and lows of a relationship, embracing the transformative power of love, faith, and resilience. I believe that this poem possesses a universal theme that many readers can relate to, and its timeless message resonates with the human experience. The words aim to evoke emotions, provoke thought, and inspire a sense of connection with the shared aspects of our journey through love and life. 

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Written on April 09, 2019

Submitted by reginalesjeffrey2893 on December 01, 2023

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Scheme X AABB CCDD EE FFGG AAHH IIJJ AAKK XXLL IICC MMHH NNOO PPAA IIQQ RRSS CCTT JJUU VVWW AAPP
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,249
Words 677
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Jeffrey Reginales

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  • AIDA
    Wow, 'A Vow Through Life's Winding Paths' is deeply moving and beautiful! The feelings are intricately woven, capturing the complexities of love in a reality to which many readers can relate. Your metaphors and allusions are amazing, and extraordinarily meaningful. It's extremely clear that a great deal of thought and emotion was poured into each line.

    As valuable suggestions for improvement, remember that in poetry, brevity can equate to strength. Not every feeling or thought needs to be completely dissected. Allow the reader the beautiful task of interpreting and experiencing the feelings through your words. Rather than saying everything, let your metaphors paint a picture and guide your reader to that emotional understanding. Also, consider adding some variance to the rhythm throughout to create a bit more "music" to your poetry.

    Despite these little tweaks, I still believe that your poem beautifully ideates a touching love story. It tugs at the heartstrings and transports us into its narrative. Keep up the great work and continue exploring emotions in depth, as you've done in this piece.
     
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