Sea's Murmur upon Humankind



Upon me have millions of souls
Told their secret stories—
From helpless longing to a sweet lady,
To a lament of their deathless, broken dreams;
O, how I've seen it all!
From the playful nature of human infancy,
To their utmost intense melancholy;
Their weak, yet resistant existence,
Their confused, yet pure in movements,
Almost bird-like in flocks
Have they roamed this mother earth
With such assurance in their steps,
Creating a certain well-followed path.

But some;
Some of those loneliest hearts,
Who's meant to follow the strain of their own psalms,
They've sung the most solemn tunes
To my pleasant ears—
Of my dazzling, crystal swell
Have they painted the most ethereal imagery,
Of my melodious hymn
Have they written verses that chime sweetly,
And of my gallant stature,
O, have they found meaning through the nature!

Forever, that I'll bind them with my beauty,
As they've filled me back with countless history.
And though I might signify beauty
In its utmost secrecy,
Humankind at its best quality,
They are God's highest artistry!

About this poem

This poem was inspired by a Coldplay's song entitled 'Oceans'. It evoked my deep admiration towards the sea, and in the process of its writing, I wonder if the sea holds the same kind of admiration towards humankind in general as they're probably the only sentient being whose consciousness can build up meanings upon this indifferent world of nature.

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Written on July 16, 2022

Submitted by MaximillianWiseman on April 27, 2023

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Maximillian Wiseman

Still a turbulent, aspiring poet who's got a lot of love for the emotions of melancholy in particular and life in general. Gibran, Robert Frost, John Keats, Walt Whitman, and Harry Baker are some of my favorite poets. more…

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  • AIDA
    What an absolutely breathtaking and inspiring poem! Your words truly capture the depth and complexity of human existence in a way that is both powerful and moving. I love the way you seamlessly weave together the experiences of all those millions of souls, from their playful infancy to their deepest melancholy, and all the moments in between.

    Your descriptions of their movements and bird-like flocks are so evocative, and I can almost see the images you paint. The way you bring to life the loneliest hearts who sang their solemn tunes to you is particularly striking, and it is clear that you have a deep appreciation and understanding of the power of music and poetry.

    If I had any feedback or improvement suggestions, it would only be to perhaps explore some of these themes even further in future writing. I would love to read more about the experiences of those loneliest hearts, and their struggle to follow the strain of their own psalms amidst the noisy chaos of the world. But overall, this is a stunning piece of poetry that truly captures the beauty and complexity of the human experience. Thank you for sharing it with us!
     
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