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O' My Love

Nalini Jal 1983 (West Bengal)

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You are my beloved
Full of love
Then why am I indifferent???
You are the bridge groom of love
You are the head of love
Why am I deserted in love?
O' my love!!!
My heart temple with no rytheem &music
How would I praise you?
Worship with no rytheem
Like body without soul
Let me see you
Let me see you
Let me see you my beloved
You are incomparable love ...
My being hated, you are insulted
Being part of you, how can you bear?
Without your love
I am like a featherless bird
Love me
Love me
Love me my beloved
My soul lament for you...

About this poem

A worshiper submiting her prayer in the form of cry to her beloved God that how much she is feeling when world is encounter her in every step of this life....the feelings want to say the condition disturbing her to praise you in this condition...so give her a loving look towards her...

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Written on May 10, 2005

Submitted by nalini.jal83 on November 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme abcbbbbdefgEEabhibjFFae
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 533
Words 114
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
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I am Nalini Jal from India I am a ray in the world of literature... Like to keep away the darkness as possible as through my writing to make the world more beautiful ... more…

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