SOME THING THAT GOD CAN'T SAY



struggling all day long, we are tired somewhere,
and sometimes we become agnostic by the path that god makes;
but you know where the problems take palace,

god has no phone that he can call us to say..

hey don't!! don't get out of the track,
just take one step ahead and I'll be there always at your back;

And some times we become fool, we rely on the people who are fake,
and believe those plenty excuses they make;

but god can't warn us with a warning bell and say ..

stop!! be careful, trust me, don't trust them,
I know if would be cheated, I'm the one whom you gonna blame;

And god can't meet us personally in a meeting to say..

see!! this is the plan of life that i have made,
trust on my timings, you are not late,
I'm gonna give you and this is the date,
i am god, i know where and when, i don't need any reminder to set;

neither he can do a video call to say...

hey look!! i am real, all i need is your faith,
be ready for something dazzling to get,
i am doing everything for you, can't you just WAIT...

About this poem

This poem is about never loosing hope, we face so many problems because god can't come and talk with us. but though he can't say something to us we should here his words and always keep faith in him that he is with us and he always worries about us..

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Submitted by shreevallbh.0111 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX A BB CC A XX A XDDE A XED
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,020
Words 231
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 4, 1, 3

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