I can't move on



The days are so long
I can hardly remember the days I was strong
You want to make things right
yet we always seem to fight
I can't forget what you did
although there are so many emotions I hid
when I tried to tell you how I felt
I saw no sight of guilt
I heard words or an excuse
you never even saw the emotional abuse
you crushed my heart
and now you want a brand new start
how is it that you can move on
when most of me is gone
the pieces that remain are shattered
while my thoughts are all scattered
I feel like I'm stuck
I can't seem to move on
Maybe I just need you gone



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This is a poem of a relationship gone wrong where one wants to start again while the other one is broken

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Submitted by Rvicky03 on December 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDEFFGGHIJJKHI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 589
Words 136
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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