Analysis of Tanka 05

Masaoki Shiki 1867 (Matsuyama, Ehime) – 1902 (Tokyo)



saw the country
and returned—now deep at night
I lie in bed and
fields of mustard flowers
bloom before my eyes


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (80%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 1010 0011111 11010 111010 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 116
Words 23
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Masaoki Shiki

Masaoka Shiki, pen-name of Masaoka Noboru was a Japanese poet, author, and literary critic in Meiji period Japan. more…

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