NubianFantabulous
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I enjoyed the subject, phrasing, and rhyme-rhythm of this piece. Sure seems like a winner to me. It had a great cadence as I read it.

This poetic work uplifted me as I read it. The rhythmic cadence flowed well. It's a magnanimous piece! I thoroughly enjoyed the read. It definitely stood out to me. The concept of seeing life in a colorful new way is resonating. I am partial to the creative way in which the writer expresses experiencing life with/in a brand new view. more »

AMEN!

Remarkable! I love how this poem comes full circle with Acceptance that we can only be who we are, no matter how others might try to steer us in a different direction. The father could never make the son become gritty, and now the son wants his son to be more educated than laboring. But at the end of it all everyone is who they are. Brilliant. more »

Superb!

Gorgeous imagery!

This poem has a very beautiful subject matter. The activity of perfect love in the most wholesome and innocent way. Caring, being cared for, and belonging. I appreciate how the writer switches from the Objective to the Subjective. The author is both parent and child; Server and served, Lover and loved. Which essentially, is the way of life. The circle of life. This is a lovely poetic work and I am so glad I read it. more »

You are legendary...

Riveting! Very well said. Thank you for this. God bless you.

Amen. Poetry is NOT dead! I can relate to this poem. Poetry is a close friend, indeed. Thank you for this. God bless you.

Yes, Yes, Yes!!!!! Amen! So glad to read this. I have been searching for this mindset! This poem is a testament that one must never lose hope! For there are many who do still exist in this world that understand just how important this concept is! Thank you so much for this beautiful display of literary gallantry. I greatly appreciate it. God bless you. more »

My goodness gracious, Lord! Man you are magnanimous and full of depth. I thank God I found you on here. I dare say, so far you are my favorite poet of 2024. Everything I have read from you resonates so very well and I am definitely here for it! Thank you for this. God bless you. more »

Ahhh such bliss! This is fantastic in every way. And I completely and utterly understand. I am grateful to read something that connects in a far more personal manner than I expected it would. Oh how I love the "I amuse the muse that amused you" that line in itself, feels like falling in love, or at least to me it does. Quite gifted you are. Please don't ever stop. Thank you for this! God bless you, my fellow poet. more »

Superb! Fantastic imagery.

This was like a deep relaxing flow of breath on a warm summer day. Thank you.