Grosbyrne's comments

Poem is simple is well versed. It reminds me of the scripture which says unless you are like a child you cannot enter the Kingdom of God.

The poem has great rhythm. I enjoyed it immensely. My only thought after reading it was to say why you shouldn't cry. My wife an i lost a child at 5 months old. It might be hard for you to believe that that child did in 5 months perhaps mor than my other 4 children have ever done for me. I heard the Lord say at the point of her death, make peace with your Father now. Since that time I have known the Lord is in control of every moment of my life. I know that today even though I continue to sin like every other person on this earth except Christ. He takes mine and your sin forever . We are alive in christ even when we feel dead or lost. more »