I don't know what this is or what it means, or where it's going--but I'd like you to read it.



a black mist and
drunken sweat,
lightly whispering against
warm, heavy skin.

how bitter
it was,
like an undeserved storm,
in a single falling water drop,
frantic to touch
the beautiful soft petal of
a perfect peach rose.
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Submitted on October 16, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXX XXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 210
Words 38
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 7

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