Heaven Waits (Blues Poem #15)



Counting spaces between the notes,
  the music came alive

The melody deepened, the band on fire,
  all bees have left the hive

Breathing in one fast refrain,
  my lungs too full to stop

An Angel melts his pearl baton,
  the Sirens blazing hot

New sounds created, harp destroyed,
  the clouds all push apart

As heaven waits for one last riff,
 —to claim my beating heart

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2018)
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 14, 2018

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XA XX XX XB XB X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 400
Words 69
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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