Last Breath..



Come close, So I may catch a
kiss from those ruby lips...
And if it cost me my life
I want my last breath to be
Stolen by a kiss.
.JPenarandaReflections©2015.
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Submitted by JesusPenaranda on April 17, 2015

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Jesus Penaranda

Name: Jesus Penaranda Race: Cuban American Eye color: Hazel Occupation: Communications Hobbies: Photography, writing, spirituality, family outtings, napping Nick Name: Hace History: Hace was one of those kids in high school who got along with various niches. As a result, he ended up with many different types of friends from various nationality and as soon as he graduated traveled the United States from NY to California and places in between. Nonetheless he was accepted by all different cultures and was considered open minded. During a period of living in Texas he attended acommunity college as a electronics student, and somehow was lucky enough to land a job with a large utility company. Remained there and moved to Southern California. Were he took up the study of communication.. Other Facts: Extremely intuitive and sensitive, is an old soul...With an ability to learn something from anyone. I already lost touch with a couple of people I use to be.. more…

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  • Jackie Lynn Singleton
    Jackie Lynn Singleton
    Takes My Breath Away ~
    LikeReply8 years ago
  • Jesus Penaranda
    Jesus Penaranda
    Thank you for the vote and the 5 stars. As you can see I'm a new member and before I joined
    I randomly searched through the page, before I knew it 90 minutes had gone by. I been writing for years to help me figure out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at compare to what I see and what it means. Do I fear it and if so for what reason? So I have as you can see, several poems written and hidden in my documents and now I'm glad to be part of a group I feel comfortable enough to share my thoughts. thank you for that. 
    LikeReply 19 years ago
    • STANDS4
      STANDS4
      Thank you! We're delightful to host your compelling poems on Poetry.net!
      LikeReply 19 years ago

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