I want to make you smile as you do to me



I want to make you smile as you do to me.
I’m longing you saw my thoughts right through my eyes.
You ask me what I’m thinking. I can’t tell you.
You are the stars, and I thy empty skies.

In me there is a yearning ever flowing
That needs to reach an end that never comes.
I cannot be myself without you with me.
This is a truth no wisdom ever plumbs.

You laugh, and say that I’m your personal angel,
And this is what I want so much to be.
The beauty of my life is like a passion
That blows right through the person that you see.
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XXAB XAXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 524
Words 110
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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