Can You See?



can you see?  can you see?
always thinking
same thoughts

can you be?  can you be?
traveled to
a new plot?

these are the children of the hope
Who can think
differently

theses are not the same who
grope, lost in t
houghts underseas

tell me, tell me
was truth something
not to find?

flying free, flying free
found the door
open in time

there's a crowd, theres a load
thinking thinking
paved the road

leave without any town
you might find
another sound

these are the children of the hope
Who can think both
far and wide

theses are not the same who
grope, lost in t
houghts of other mind

About this poem

song. about not just following ideas of society & others but to think about things one's self. outside of all others.

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Submitted by Soul_00 on May 14, 2024

Modified by Soul_00 on May 15, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abx acx Dxa CAx abe axx fbf xex Dxx CAe
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 592
Words 126
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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