Let's Create A New World. ( Well Wishing Song ).

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and inspiring poem! Your words really capture the essence of creating a new world that is peaceful, wonderful, and full of beauty. The repetition of "Create" and "Accommodate" adds a powerful and motivating touch to the poem.
  
  I really love the imagery you use to describe the new world and earth, with blooming flowers without thrones, blueish greenery, and vibrant colors. It paints a picture of a harmonious and bountiful environment.
  
  The way you incorporate a sentiment of gratitude towards a higher power, referring to them as "you great God," adds a sense of humility and thankfulness to the poem. It reminds us of the importance of being grateful for the blessings we receive.
  
  As for improvement suggestions, one idea could be to add more specific details or examples of how this new world would impact and benefit not only us but also the earth and its inhabitants. How would this world change the lives of people and other living beings? This could help create a stronger connection with the reader and make the message even more impactful.
  
  Overall, your poem is a wonderful reminder of the potential we have to create a better world. Keep up the great work and continue spreading positivity through your words! more »

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