Cosmic Serenade: Wishing Upon the Stars for Love's Eternal Light



If the stars really could be wished upon,
I'd spend each wish on you, my dearest one.
For in your presence, time stands still,
Your sweet voice, a symphony to thrill,
And your smile, a beacon of pure light,
Guiding me through the darkness of the night.

The night will play its music, soft and bright,
A melody that speaks of love, so true, upon
The strings of my heart, a celestial light,
That shines with the brilliance of the sun,
For in your embrace, I find my thrill,
A treasure trove of endless joy, my heart, it stills.

And seeing your beautiful smile, it stills
The doubts and fears that may take flight,
For your love is a balm that soothes, a thrill
That fills my soul with wonder, like a wish upon
A shooting star, a miracle beneath the sun,
A love so pure, it shines with radiant light.

In your eyes, I find a world of light,
A universe where my heart is stilled,
And in your touch, I feel the warmth of the sun,
A blissful embrace that sets my soul alight,
For you are the one I've wished upon,
The fulfillment of my heart's deepest thrill.

Every moment spent with you is a thrill,
A treasure that glows with eternal light,
And as I gaze upon the stars, I wish upon
Each one, that our love will never be stilled,
But will burn with a passion that shines bright,
Like the everlasting radiance of the sun.

For you are my sun, my moon, my thrill,
A love that shines with a brilliance so bright,
A treasure that fills my heart, never to be stilled,
And with you, my dearest one, I'll wish upon
The stars, for a love that's everlasting, a love so true, my light.

I'll wish upon the stars, for a love so true, my light,
That we may dance among the constellations, a cosmic thrill,
And bask in the warmth of each other's love, a radiance so bright,
That it outshines the very stars above, a shining light,
And nothing in this world could ever still,
The fire that burns within us, a flame that will never be gone.

For our love is a bond that cannot be broken, a passion so strong,
That it echoes throughout the universe, a celestial song,
And as we gaze upon the stars, we know that our wish upon
Each one has been granted, a love that will never be gone,
For you are my heart's desire, my dearest one,
And every moment spent with you is a thrill,
A treasure that fills my soul with a radiant light.

So let us dance among the stars, my love, and revel in the thrill,
Of a love that shines with a brilliance so bright,
And with each wish upon the stars, our love will never be stilled,
For it is a treasure that outshines the very sun's light,
A love that we will cherish forever, my dearest one,
A love that we have wished upon the stars, and that will never be gone.






























The poem is part of a full version found in the book "Homo Sapiens" Part XVII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular "Homo Sapiens" book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the "Homo Sapiens" series, as well as other books by the same author.

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Khublei Shihajar Nguh,
Dhanewad
Thank you

About this poem

The poem is a declaration of deep love and admiration for someone special. The speaker expresses a desire to spend every wish on their beloved, describing their presence as something that makes time stand still. The beloved's voice is likened to a symphony, their smile as a beacon of light, and their embrace as a source of endless joy. The speaker finds comfort and solace in their beloved's love, and sees them as their sun, moon, and source of everlasting light. The poem conveys a sense of passion, awe, and eternal love, with the repeated motif of wishing upon the stars as a symbol of the enduring nature of their relationship.  

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Written on February 15, 2019

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on April 20, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Scheme ABCCDD DADBCE EDCABD DFBDAC CDAFDB CDFAD DCDDCG HHAGBCD CDFDBG X X HDX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,300
Words 710
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 5, 6, 7, 6, 1, 1, 3

Mawphniang Napoleon

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