time wasn't in our favor



I hear the laughter
I know that something special's going on
I hear the passion
you mention her name
I watch from a distance
and I see the way you talk to her
so close
and I'm not the only one you want
to hold
and can't sleep now
I'm never gonna walk away
for what we've got together
cos you need me now more than ever
I want to hate her but I cant
because she's such an angel b
but I hope she was dead

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wrote this one i was at my lowest when my favorite person left me for their favorite one's

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Submitted by wishmakhurram84 on July 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEAFGHIJAAKLM
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 402
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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