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I hope I'm her Romeo

Antonius 2003 (Train)

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She has the most beautiful almond-colored eyes,
The fairest and most luminous smile,
Straight, chestnut-colored hair,
A true personality,
I wouldn't trade her for the world,
I wouldn't dare miss the universe over her,
She makes me happy,
She makes me cry,
She reminds me you must fight for love,
She has obtained my delicate heart,
If I may be Romeo, I could only pray she may be my Juliet.
An inspiring, everlasting romance.

About this poem

The title says it all, I hope that in this love story, I can be her Knight in Shining Armor, her King Arthur, her everything.

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Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 03, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFDGHIJK
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 437
Words 85
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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