A Loaner Child (A father's bitter-sweet lament)



I’ll be standing proudly by
as I walk you down the aisle,
Regaled in white, a royal sight,
A Beauty bathed with Style

I raised you from a Babe- in-Arms
Expecting you were mine,
A gift from God, I stand here awed,
He had His own design,

I am truly thankful now,
With those who love you so,
For Another’s love (Gift from above)
I gladly let you go.

Today I put your hand in his,
My memories now compiled,
I realize, with tear-filled eyes
You were just A Loaner Child

About this poem

I penned this poem when I visited my daughter on her wedding day. She was so happy as she danced around the room. I realized with mixed emotions how I felt. I gave her the poem, she hugged me, and we both had a tear-filled moment.

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Written on March 28, 1996

Submitted by Yahoody on March 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 471
Words 104
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

George Walters

Biography of Lawrence Walters I am eighty years old. I served twenty-one years in the Marine Corps as a Data Analyst. I was a Marine Corps Champion horseshoe pitcher in 1980. In 1972 I was selected to attend the Marine Corps Associate Degree Completion Program. I obtained a BA in BusAd. After my retirement from the Marine Corps as a Master Sergeant, I spent ten years as a Senior Claims Adjuster. I recently completed my third book, “Counting My Blessings." I have Parkinsons and am confined to a wheelchair, but I find freedom riding my recumbent trike. more…

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