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You're Out

Abhigyan Nath Tiwari

t gets better,
You're out
All night long at the mall
Babe you're out
Are you out of your mind?
It gets better
You're out
There is nowhere left to go
A walk in the park (storefront gate)
You walk into a bar with an attitude
But it feels so empty
You're out
All night long at the mall
Babe you're out
It gets better,
You're out
It gets better
I can't sleep tonight
I need to catch my wits
Before someone else will
I can't help myself
You know you lie
And I don't want to learn
It's just that I'm cruel to be a simple game
And being vulgar
Is something I'll never do
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Written on January 16, 2022

Submitted on January 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme aBCBdABefghBCBABAijklmnoap
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 563
Words 119
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
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