What's Wrong With Men?
Sometimes I find myself wondering, "What the F*ck is wrong with men?"
Not all of them of course, but the good ones run quite thin.
If you are one of the few like me, hold your head up high and be proud.
For you're about to read of the many men who have their heads up, in something other then the clouds.
These men need to listen up, you know exactly who you are by what you've done.
And if you don't by now, you surely will when my words roll off your tongue.
So listen to my words as students, in hope I strive to make you the teachers
So that you may learn from your mistakes, become real men and for the women out there, keepers.
Women deserve to be treated with respect and should be loved unconditionally to the end.
If you truly love someone, they should first and forever be your friend.
But unfortunately there are Some of you that are liers, abusive cowards and or cheats.
All of which are the loveless, disrespectful, arrogant assholes that look at women as if they were meat.
Women are not meat, they were created by God from the rib of man.
They are the part of us that we need, we must keep them safe and protected with everything we can.
They were not made from the feet of man, so dont walk all over them
Nor are they from the head of man, so you are not above or superior to them
No! Women were made from the side of man, to walk side by side and be equal
To always be under the arm of man, protected and sheltered from harm or evil
Don't ever look down upon women, for they can always bring us up when we are down.
Their beautiful smile and warming touch can easily lift a smile from a frown
Give them every opportunity to look up to you and they will always and forever be proud
Never give them a reason to expect anything but the love, loyalty and faithfulness you always and forever had vowed.
About this poem
I wrote this poem to all the men out there that don't treat women with dignity and respect. We are not better or hold more value, we are both only half of the equation and only together can we be truly whole.
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Submitted by OutsiderXL on September 29, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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