talygarza
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Poetic reminder to be present and mindful as human beings we are so exposed to noise and unpleasant signs that is hard to keep focused and breathing is a sign of that.

Congrats, the poem enlightens since the point of view of Paris his difficult feelings.

This poem is beautiful captures an entire feeling for trees.

Loneliness is creative just for writing. Well done.

“Peace and rewards” is nice mention in your poem.

Clever and funny poem treating something different as poetic object.

Stunning image and the poem is encouraging and creative.

I see like the thread in your poems is love and romantic issues and relations. Nice.

A poem that reminds dawn

Very smart appreciation since the frog’s view, of course metaphorical.

Very emotional poem

thanks for rating it is very appreciated.

This anti war poem is heartbreaking, no words to express the enormous pain wars bring although this human tendency to violence and self destruction continues between groups or nations. This poem is indicative of the tragedy behind every single life that ends in wars. more »

This poem brings good vibes for someone who feels hopeless, a bad emotion that human beings often carries.

oh no is just practice, I try to write all days at least one page. No imitation and if I can I like rhymes in Spanish, although I love free verse I distrust enthusiasm about free verse, anyway I respect the right to write whatever a person wants. more »